Draft Innuendo (My first novel)

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  1. Psychime

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    Inspired by Digibro I've been writing a light novel straight through except, you know, actually giving it a plot. I have 4 chapters done so far all of which are 1st drafts (Chapter 2 in particular is in need of some editing) and I hope to complete it soon. I'd love to hear what anyone thinks.

    https://www.wattpad.com/story/108781473-innuendo
     
  2. 4xdblack

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    "In new window" sounds exactly the same as "Innuendo'
     
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  3. Kuze

    Kuze Heaven's not enough
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    Gave chapter 1 a read. It became downright confusing by the end but I guess that's the idea to make me keep reading. I'll give the other chapters a read.
     
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