Poem Let's Share Haiku's!

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  1. Setzu

    Setzu Senior Member

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    I figure Haiku's are super easy, and we could get a thread going that any writers can join in on easily!

    For reference, the first and last lines of a Haiku have 5 syllables and the middle line has 7 syllables.

    I'll start~

    Red and yellow hue
    Satisfying crunch underfoot
    Wheres my pumpkin spice
     
  2. Setzu

    Setzu Senior Member

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    Don't be scared! Look, I'll do another one.

    Whats that awful stench
    I must have stepped in something
    Nope its this haiku
     
  3. Kuze

    Kuze Heaven's not enough
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    Fire burning within
    The wind blowing in my face
    I think I will run.


    Wait, did that even make sense?
     
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  4. ChatterboxZombie

    ChatterboxZombie Meat causes cancer.
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    Haiku are quite bland.
    Not minimalistic art.
    Nor eloquent prose.

    Restricted they are.
    By the Japanese language.
    Sounds bad in English.
     
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    Shi The Aspirer
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    Mentally disturbed,
    May need expert help daily,
    Velociraptor.
     
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    StrawHats Stuck in a chair
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    Playing Counter Strike
    Teammates are bunch of morons
    Would rather have BOTS
     
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  7. Setzu

    Setzu Senior Member

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    This is a Haiku inspired by my word jumble fridge magnets.

    When shaving armpits
    No ninja gets left behind
    Abrasive feline
     
    #7 Setzu, Nov 7, 2016
    Last edited: Nov 7, 2016
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  8. StrawHats

    StrawHats Stuck in a chair
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    Life is very short
    Each waking moment's a flash
    Poop fast when you do
     
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  9. Kiruti

    Kiruti Attack of the Away From Keyboard -Strawhats

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    Hatred dwells inside
    From man, God, and self loathness
    The heart yearns for love
     
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    Humiliation
    Can become humility
    In healthy doses
     
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    Saturna Active Member
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    My wisdom tooth hurts
    The pain is very intense
    I need a dentist
     
  12. Shadow Fox

    Shadow Fox Enemy of the State
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    Walking in the snow
    Listening to Classical
    While taking Pictures
     
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    Matemar Corvus

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    My eyes burn a lot
    I was gaming for the whole night
    It has cost me dear sleep
     

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