Rise of the Protector

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  1. Ravok

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    Hello everyone, Ravok here.
    And now that there is finallly a writing section, Rise of the protector is back.
    Ill put what i wrote down here in summary and in a spoiler.
    To post the whole thing is a little bit too big because its an 86 page work right now already.
    Ravok (The main character) met red and blue, two girls who saved him from a mysterious man that attacked his house. He soul links with them to save red who got badly injured in the fight by soul linking with them. Giving him unique powers similair to red and blue's. But then they get kidnapped by a woman in white. Ravok gets captured by a group protecting earth by capturing and experimenting with powerfull soul beasts wich ravok became, there he meets one of his classmates Lily and a mysterious savior called Green. They help him to save red and blue, and find out that both of them came from the dimension red and blue where kidnapped to, Ravok finally saves them after going in rage mode and escapes home, having multiple conflicts still with the group protecting earth and getting lily in trouble. He kills lilys dad on accident after being forced into a battle to the death with him by the group protecting earth. Lily is enraged tries to kill ravok but sees what happend and forgives him. Eventually he meets the woman in white again, but this time he asked her for help training and the woman in white is revealed to be hannah. She was a friend all along and now helps ravok and his group. At last ravok goes to a facility after offering lily safety from the group protecting earth who she betrayed. He finds lots of people and people of the void there and brings them back to the dimension red and blue live in. But gets confronted by the color people (People like Red, Hannah, Blue and Green) because they are at war with the People of the void.
    I might have missed some things but this is the majority of what happend in a very very short summary.
    Now i write this story in a script like form. But i hope you all enjoy my story and maybe some of you are glad its back?
     
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    The Power of Rage
    Ravok: Enemys? I would say refugees.
    Guard Leader: They are enemys. People of the other side, People who must die.
    Ravok: These innocent people, who have done nothing wrong. Are enemies?
    Guard Leader: Innocent? These faul creatures tortured our people.
    *Ravok suddenly gets his serious face on*
    Ravok: And you are going to say that you didnt?
    Guard leader: Tsk, i dont have to take this from you, ATTACK!
    *Suddenly laser sights are set onto the group Ravok is escorting*
    Ravok: RED, BLUE!
    Red: WE KNOW!
    *Red and Blue get on a side so that the three of them cover 1/3 each. The People of the void put their barrier up in such a way that Ravok Red and Blue are outside of it.*
    Guard Leader: FIRE!
    *Bullets start to rain upon them, the three of them barely able to keep most of the bullets from not hitting the shield. Suddenly, Ravok gets hit by a spear, The Guard leader has now taken his weapon and barely missed ravoks stomach, hitting his side*
    Ravok: Ugh.
    *Ravok readies towards the enemy*

    Sorry guys ill continue this later I dont have the time anymore
     
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